changes to be made

This to be fitted into the story as i think I've taken out all my descriptive side.





this row of houses had been vacant for some time while the area was waiting to be cleared completely.

He was a tall man in his early twenties with lanky blonde hair, his skin was badly marked which could have been left after acne or german measles.

He explained that his name was Daniel Jones and he had an uncle named Billy Jones who ran a fish shop locally.



He was taken into an interview room after he explained that he could possibly help the police with thenewspaper enquiry